<Pony>< Orchestral><Vocals> Octavia (I'm Playing)

[just4lolzz]

Finally got my mic working with the computer: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eihueB_mhA8

[ChocolateChicken]

It sounds like you cut a ton of high end from the vocals, which you shouldn't do. Either that, or you need a better microphone. This makes the vocals sound very cheap, and it really diminishes the value of the song. Other than that, I enjoyed the song. You sound like a great singer, and the composition and lyrics are both great. Fix the vocals a bit and you'll have a much better song.