<original><pony>Need opinions, once again.

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<original><pony>Need opinions, once again.

Postby limeywimey » 02 Nov 2012 17:17

Need opinions, once again.

http://youtu.be/H4xRE_LhPX8

Good things about the song/mix?
Bad things about the song/mix?

Happy to receive any type of comment :D
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Re: <original><pony>Need opinions, once again.

Postby Ohffy » 03 Nov 2012 10:51

First off all let me say that you shouldnt listen to what im about to say as i do not have a lot of expirience in the making of music but lets get started

It sounds nice a simple beginning gets complex as you go through the song solid structure nice

Adding other elements besides piano could really do it some good drums would make it sound great

And this is probably just me but at around 1:30 when the secound piano comes in it kinda feels a little abrupt and throuout it feels a little off but i dont know it could just be me

Well theres my 2 cents like i said im pretty new to this whole thing ive only been putting out stuff for like 8 months and i dont really feel im qualified to critique anyones song but i hate when i post a song and no one comments on it so yeah keep it up man :D
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