<Origional><nonpony> Yostyle - looking for feedback

[Rainbow_Rage]

http://soundcloud.com/rainbow_rage/yostyle

After doing jack all during the summer, starting to get more into music.

I've been sitting on this one for a while and finally got to the point where I like it/am sick of it.

Have a listen and if you like leave come criticism. I've improved a lot but am nowhere near being any good yet. Help me do even better next time.