[Pony][Breakcore][WIP] Sweetie bot vs R-Dash 5000

[Ohffy]

yeah so i decided to make this based off a picture my friend drew and i could really use some criticism anything will help

http://soundcloud.com/ohffy/sweetie-bot-vs-r-dash-5000-almost-done

Guitar has been takin out

thanks again for listening

[XXDarkShadow79XX]

The vocal samples are definitely off, and so is that bass. I like the glitching of the beat, but that high frequency beep thing has got to go.

Also, why does the song just stop?

[Ohffy]

I fixed the sample and i have yet to think of a better bass line to put in and the song just stops because i havent gotten that far yet sadly ):

heres a link to the new edit if you would like to hear the newest edit

http://soundcloud.com/ohffy/sweetie-bot ... h-5000-wip

and i guess hte beeps dont sound as good as i think they do
thanks for the feedback dude

[XXDarkShadow79XX]

Cool, the samples are a lot better now. But when I said beep I mean that super-high pitched beep at the beginning.

[Ohffy]

i knew that sounded a little weird oh well removed thanks