<Pony><collab><Original><orchestral/rock> Rainbow of Life

[00ToD00]

A collab i did with a friend, please tell me what do you think ^^ it's a bit long, but i think it's worth it

http://soundcloud.com/00tod00/00tod00-peris-rainbow-of-life

[00ToD00]

i suppose you guys don't like it very much :/
anyways, replaced the terrible video by a nice soundcloud embed, that way it's high quality

[Djeinus]

It's pretty good. I just don't have anything actually constructive to say, except that.

[colortwelve]

Okay, so I think I've got a little feedback for ya ^_^

-The bass doesn't sound centered in the mix, which tends to be pretty standard practice, so I'd work on that in the future.
-The synths don't sound very EQ'd, and as a result don't really jump out of the mix like they probably should.
-That initial guitar sounds kind of like FL Slayer; the solo guitar sounds really nice, though. So whatever you're doing for the solo, be it a real guitar or a Kontakt library or whatever, I'd try working on a similar solution to your heavier guitar, because Slayer has a pretty awful attack noise that's hard to EQ out without destroying the sound.
-I'd say, just in general, this could all be EQ'd so that the instruments come through a bit more clearly, and from the waveform it looks like it's not mastered very thoroughly either.

However, that's all technical stuff. Musically, this is brilliant, and I wish I could compose like this. So definitely keep up that end of what you've got going!

[00ToD00]

Okay, so I think I've got a little feedback for ya ^_^

-The bass doesn't sound centered in the mix, which tends to be pretty standard practice, so I'd work on that in the future.
-The synths don't sound very EQ'd, and as a result don't really jump out of the mix like they probably should.
-That initial guitar sounds kind of like FL Slayer; the solo guitar sounds really nice, though. So whatever you're doing for the solo, be it a real guitar or a Kontakt library or whatever, I'd try working on a similar solution to your heavier guitar, because Slayer has a pretty awful attack noise that's hard to EQ out without destroying the sound.
-I'd say, just in general, this could all be EQ'd so that the instruments come through a bit more clearly, and from the waveform it looks like it's not mastered very thoroughly either.

However, that's all technical stuff. Musically, this is brilliant, and I wish I could compose like this. So definitely keep up that end of what you've got going!

okay.
-There are no synths on this song, those are string sections
-The bass is supossed to be in center... I guess i change it without noticing
-The guitar plugin is not slayer, but it's a pluging without as much quality as kontakt, i have a reason, my PC has only 1GB of RAM so kontakt rapes it.

-Both solos and riff are the same guitar
-Thanks so much for the feedback, i do prefer writing music instead of mixing it. But i want to share it