<original><wip>The Icefield

[Nine Volt]

Some kind of ambient, house-y thing at 140 BPM. IDK.

http://soundcloud.com/nine-volt/wip-the-icefield

So. What could be improved/any suggestions?

[Nine Volt]

Totally unnecessary bump

[GhostXb]

It's an interesting mix of ambient and house, that's for sure. However, I feel the ambient side, and the house side want to go in different directions, or at least, once that lead synth kicks in at 1:16, that's the way it seems.

The bass and kicks do work quite well with the atmospheric sounds. I think maybe the leads could use a more subtle transition if that's the direction you want to go.

You could also try keeping the atmospheric sounds more in tune, (or in scale) with the lead synth, however, speaking from experience, THAT IS VERY DIFFICULT TO DO, as most atmospheric sounds aren't designed to be in pitch.

Good luck! XD

[Nine Volt]

Yeah, would've added transitions but I still haven't quite figured out automation clips in FL Studio, and I was too lazy to get reverses.

And yeah, I might be able to keep some of the sounds in tune with the lead.

Thanks!