MuffinScratchV4

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MuffinScratchV4

Postby M4ng0s » 26 Sep 2011 21:33

http://soundcloud.com/m4ng0s/muffincratchv4-mp3-version
So this is the First time i make a Pony releated Song and i am so bad With FlStudio so plz give me feed back if you like that Also you Guys Can Remix Any of my song i have made Just Give give me the Final result. my skype jp_oruna. Xfire Darckstard. Steam m4ng0s.
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Re: MuffinScratchV4

Postby Makkon » 26 Sep 2011 21:43

Not bad! I thought the timing in the vocals was interesting, wish you played on that a bit more. Would have really added a lot to the track. The instruments were a little lackluster, but decent.

Just stick with it, man. Each new song you write will be exponentially better than the last.

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Re: MuffinScratchV4

Postby Facade » 27 Sep 2011 05:36

interesting, not bad though
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Re: MuffinScratchV4

Postby bartekko » 27 Sep 2011 10:27

I like fluttercuts a lot, also, the melody, but it could use a tiny bit of variation (just a little, as it's just the same thing over and over

and over

and over
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