Lunar Concealment

[BronyJake]

Hey Everypony!
BronyJake here, Nothing special. Just trying out this community.
I currently one song out at the moment, That being Lunar Concealment:



It being my first song, It has a lack of vocals and a very dumb spelling mistake due to lack of sleep. Although, I am making a 2nd Edit of this song including vocals. But any previews of that would be posted in WIP.

Other than the spelling mistake and it being REPEATITIVE AS HELL, Any feedback is appreciated!

[SuperGiantRobot]

Actually, if you think about it, that's a halfway clever pun.

Luna was sealed on the moon for a thousand years, so...

[BronyJake]

Why do you think I named it that? Hehe

[SuperGiantRobot]

Because you said yourself it was a spelling error. No taking credit, young colt. Don't make me come in there.

[Dr_Dissonance]

Other than the spelling mistake and it being REPETITIVE (sic) AS HELL, Any feedback is appreciated!

Well, my only comment is that it's repetitive! So I don't have much else to say...

Nice opening though, I enjoyed that! Just mix it up a bit, add some more interesting stuff and you'll be on to a winner!

[BronyJake]

Because you said yourself it was a spelling error. No taking credit, young colt. Don't make me come in there.

Oh, I'm sorry I misunderstood you. I thought you meant "concealment" as in since she was kept from being seen, sealed away and such. Until reading it now I didn't know you were talking about the spelling mistake and the word "sealed" having a connection. Silly me.

And, with it being repetitive (talking to the other person). It is currently undergoing a massive remix process to change it up! Hehe

[bartekko]

A bit of sidechain level automation would make a ton of difference

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