making some changes to this song

[Nine Volt]

Yeah, I'm not dead. Even though I was only gone for like 3 days.

http://soundcloud.com/nine-volt/nine-volt-electrosteps

Had a random chord sitting alone in a project file and this is what it became.

Total Project Time: 3 hours.

Welp... gonna make some changes, song will be back soon

[Proverbial]

It's a pleasant listen overall, if not a bit devoid of a sense of movement in real interpretation of the word, and I'm impressed that you could do anything like this in three hours. I'd sit around for a day just trying to make something come together. Aside, two things bother me about this; the first being the bassline that comes in at 1:08 in that it sounds out of key and disorienting, and the second issue of mine is with the arp that comes in at 1:37 and that it gets buried under all the other sounds, the bassline overpowers it. It's a nice piece for something that came together in less than a day, but it also carries the signs of anything bearing such beginnings. Granted I'm no better and I'm no stranger to under-qualified people on the internet taking cheap shots, but regardless I felt like "getting in my two cents worth". Hope you enjoyed my cobbled together paragraph of critique.

[Nine Volt]

It's a pleasant listen overall, if not a bit devoid of a sense of movement in real interpretation of the word, and I'm impressed that you could do anything like this in three hours. I'd sit around for a day just trying to make something come together. Aside, two things bother me about this; the first being the bassline that comes in at 1:08 in that it sounds out of key and disorienting, and the second issue of mine is with the arp that comes in at 1:37 and that it gets buried under all the other sounds, the bassline overpowers it. It's a nice piece for something that came together in less than a day, but it also carries the signs of anything bearing such beginnings. Granted I'm no better and I'm no stranger to under-qualified people on the internet taking cheap shots, but regardless I felt like "getting in my two cents worth". Hope you enjoyed my cobbled together paragraph of critique.

BRB Gonna make some changes to this song