Loving that synthwork going on, (Just made up another word. :D) but the real shining issue is that at the moment, it's not hardstyle. Hardstyle has the dark synths that you have, but what the genre requires that you lack is the distorted kick. Your track actually sounds more like psytrance than hardstyle. Just nab a few hardstyle kick samples if you want (No one really cares) or maybe even distort the hell out of a 909 kick or an acoustic kick with
Tridirt or something.
I really like this, and if you just, you know, make it hardstyle then it would be really awesome!
Edit: Oh yeah, and be careful with Glitch. You used it to amazing effect here, (I couldn't even tell until I read your comment) but it can be really noticeable at times, and it is really overused.