<non-pony> <remix> Hit And Run [FOR A CONTEST! PLEASE VIEW!]

[Elliptisoar]

http://soundcloud.com/elliptisoar/breathe-carolina-hit-and-run

PLEASE. PLEASE listen to this and give me ANY feedback possible.

This is for a contest hosted by COLUMBIA RECORDS. It needs to be perfect. Thanks!

[LFP]

Not much to critique, I like it!
The only thing I felt was that the drum breaks with cymbals at the chorus feels a bit off and sudden, without the snare it loses some of the beat, most likely simply transitioning it better would do it.
Good luck in your contest, I hope you win!