<pony> <remix> <WIP> so many wonders

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<pony> <remix> <WIP> so many wonders

Postby Metabrony » 28 Aug 2012 17:39

http://soundcloud.com/supergeek-1/so-many-wonders-wip
I'm not sure if I should finish this, or move on to something different.
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Re: <pony> <remix> <WIP> so many wonders

Postby EverfreeLuna » 28 Aug 2012 20:35

I like it but it sounds like it's hitting a limiter a bit to hard in certain places? I don't know much about electronic music so perhaps someone else could confirm? ;)
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Re: <pony> <remix> <WIP> so many wonders

Postby Hangin' From A Cloud » 30 Aug 2012 07:08

For some reason I hear a clicking sound during the vocals (starting from 0:09). That may be the limiter, or I'm just stupid and that's a clicky synth. If it's not intentionaly, try to fix that/smooth it out.
Very nice house synth there. But the song could use something more at 1:16, when the kicks come back with full ... kick. Maybe an additional melody, another synth or something.
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Re: <pony> <remix> <WIP> so many wonders

Postby Lyonize » 30 Aug 2012 08:43

This sounds really really good! I think it sounds a bit loud on the high end of things. Maybe eq a few things just a little bit. Also, like Hangin From a Cloud said, I think the kicks could be a little bit kick-ie-er. Try eqing the kick with a short spike at about 100 Hz and for a little more punchiness if you'd like, add another short spike around 2-3 kHz and mess around with that until it sounds good. But it's all up to you and what you want the kick to sound like. Can't wait to hear the final version!
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Re: <pony> <remix> <WIP> so many wonders

Postby Metabrony » 31 Aug 2012 15:18

I was not too happy with the mixing, so I decided to restart on this song.

Here is the Wip if anyone wants to give feedback > http://www.mediafire.com/?2cs9vtgubhments
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