<nonpony><original> Feeble Screams

[nirv]

After a month of work, here's my second release. Something with dubstep elements, lots of piano, and screams and growls. No idea what genre this falls in, call it what you like. Dubstep, electro, smooth jazz, parlor, enka, knock yourself out.

I've yet to learn drum layering lol.

Critiques, comments, ducks, and grass clippings greatly appreciated

much love.

[Acrylia]

Lots o glitch. The drop could use a little variation in the screams, like using different basses for it instead of one scream. Speaking of bass, there is almost non. Buff up the kick a little and add sub bass or something

[nirv]

There's actually a lot of sub bass going on in the drop, though I've been told it's too low to be heard. I'll keep in mind to put my subs in higher octaves next time around. As for the kicks, I've yet to learn proper drum processing, but it's next on my list.

[Nonsense_Profile]

This is just my preference but I think that drop would be really nice about 5 decibel's louder, another fun thing to do is play around with pitch and timing, seem's like it could make alot of difference.

You are a beautiful person, keep going!

[nirv]

This is just my preference but I think that drop would be really nice about 5 decibel's louder, another fun thing to do is play around with pitch and timing, seem's like it could make alot of difference.

You are a beautiful person, keep going!

I'm... I'm beautiful? o-o

But yeah, I did intend for the drop to be louder, but along the way I think it ended up being level with everything else. Don't know what went wrong.

And yes, more variation in drop, noted, thanks for your feedback