<Pony> <Original> <Melodic DnB> <Orchestral> Eternal Night

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<Pony> <Original> <Melodic DnB> <Orchestral> Eternal Night

Postby Zykrath » 17 Aug 2012 14:46

Hello!
I'm new to MLR, and I would like some feedback on my newest track.
I also don't have very much recognition. I would like it if you guys would share this to sites like Equestria Daily!
Thanks!

Zykrath - Eternal Night

YouTube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0EN8TJxbbRs&feature=plcp

SoundCloud: http://soundcloud.com/zykrath/zykrath-eternal-night
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Re: <Pony> <Original> <Melodic DnB> <Orchestral> Eternal Nig

Postby Hangin' From A Cloud » 17 Aug 2012 16:54

Wow,awesome track there! I think the piano is too quiet, but that's about my only complaint. And it reminded me of a Nightwish song (Moondance), and it's Luna/moon themed too (coincidence?) so that's a + for me. Really well made song, you got yourself a subscriber :)
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Re: <Pony> <Original> <Melodic DnB> <Orchestral> Eternal Nig

Postby Baschfire » 17 Aug 2012 18:29

This is pretty damn good! Things I would change:

In the beginning, i'd say hold the strings out longer (or don't let them release early), and definitely push up the volume of the piano. Try making the drum pattern smoother too! Orchestral + DnB is an amazing combo, if done right, but the drums are always key.
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