<WIP> <Pony> Time and Time Again

Let's hear what you've got, Brony. Feedback is encouraged. Please embed EQBeats, Youtube or Soundcloud.

<WIP> <Pony> Time and Time Again

Postby Legion » 17 Aug 2012 13:16

Temporary name I just randomly came up with. A chill hip hop instrumental, was hoping for opinions. Also, does this sound like something to be rapped over? Cause I'm getting a few people telling me it doesn't. ;~;

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/60584788/Music ... 0Again.mp3
User avatar
Legion
 
Posts: 469
Joined: 10 Mar 2012 22:46
Location: Detroit

Re: <WIP> <Pony> Time and Time Again

Postby Conduit » 18 Aug 2012 02:43

I like it. I think some drum fills or hats/shakers at the beginning would do it good, there are a few places that feel kinda empty. An example would be right before the main beat kicks in. I get that it's supposed to build a bit of tension, but its really empty sounding.

Also, I could see a super chill, slow rap over this.
https://soundcloud.com/flatflish/a-warm-past

DAW: Logic 9
Vst's: Absynth, Battery, FM8, Guitar Rig, Kontakt, Massive, Maschine
Real Instruments: Acoustic/Electric Guitar, Cello, Piano

YoutubeSoundcloudTutors ThreadSkype: FlatflishImage
User avatar
Conduit
 
Posts: 494
Joined: 12 Mar 2012 20:48
Location: Alberta, Canada
OS: Windows 8
Primary: Logic Pro 9
Cutie Mark: Strings


Return to General Music Feedback and Advice



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Google [Bot] and 12 guests

cron