[Original][WIP][Non-Pony Currently]First Attempt At A Song

[Ohffy]

Hello musicians of My Little Remix Ohffy here with my first attempt at a song ever this is still heavily a work in progress and criticism is always welcome. Please don't be gentle when giving criticism.

http://soundcloud.com/ohffy/my-first-attempt-at-a-song

No squares aloud ):<

[Hangin' From A Cloud]

Well, it doesn't really have a definite structure, the glitching might be out of place here,and the transitions are rough. The synths go out of sync with the drums a little at around 1min.
I'd suggest using filter sweeps, or samples that increase in volume for transitions. Or just silence,that might work too . And leave time for everything to go quiet at the end of the song.

On the bright side, I like that melody. It has a nice lullaby-ish atmosphere to it. (If I were you, I would run the drum loop through a high pass filter to get a more chilled outcome, and let the notes in the beginning ring out a bit more. But that's just me, do your own thing )
This is better then my first try was IMO, so not a bad start if you ask me.

[Ohffy]

Thanks man ill check all that stuff out! And yeah the glitchy part was just me having too much fun and the "everything sounds good at 1 am syndrome" really thanks