Luna [Diss Order Club Mix] - EBB

[Diss Order]

Yes, I have permission to use that art.





COMMENCE GIVING ME FEEDBACK... if you don't mind, of course.

No seriously, first finished production EVER for me. I'm the biggest noob with any DAW, so please go easy on me.

[Andy Feelin]

This is really cool
the first of the coolest moments was when the bass started
although before the verse there's an empty bar with only bass playing, and since your bass is so syncopated, it sounds not at its best, you'd better add some 4/4 hats or reverse kicks or whatever
IMHO a listener would expect the second and the third chorus to be more and more powerful, and some cool synth riff after the second chorus. Otherwise it seems like the song progresses on and on but never comes to its climax!
Anyway, nice remix!

[Diss Order]

Yeah, I kinda had that feeling myself as well. Thing is, I've been trying to add stuff and failed horribly so last night I just decided to wrap it up and be done with it.

In my defence, this started out differently. I wanted to make a simple Club track, but then I started hanging towards commercial dance track hits of 5~10 years ago (for example Love Comes Again - Tiesto). I don't have the skills to make such a complicated track and hence I kept failing when trying to work on a proper climax. But this project has been unfinished for the last 3 months so I'm glad I now finally got it over with and wrapped it up. Probably won't be working this particular track anymore now, but feedback is welcome to keep in mind for future productions.

[Andy Feelin]

I had the very same problem for most of my early work. So don't mind, just keep on practicing.