<pony>Rarity (Piano Improvisation)

[LoreRD]

And here's another part of my mane 6 improv series. Feel free to comment and critique; I still need to improve, though this is likely not my best improv.

[soultensionbenjamin]

29 minutes are you insaiyan

[Hangin' From A Cloud]

Oh boy what have I gotten myself into, I'm not an expert in this... Oh well heeere I go.

I like what I hear so far. Though sometimes it gets a little too quiet, even for a pianissimo.
Oh, at about 11:20 the left hand plays a little...torn? They do not flow cleanly, but are sort of... separate. Gah,I just can't express myself...
14:38/15:20: way too much left hand there I think.
And sometimes the right hand doesn't have that nice legato either. And at times it has stress on the wrong notes.
19:00: onward: Oh my that's so beautiful...
28:30: Oh hey, the MLP theme! Nice touch

I always loved these kind of musicians, because they just whip up something amazing on the go (that's how it goes right?). And that's the one thing I can't do. And it's not like free jazz, where the impro sections are a complete clusterf*ck of sounds. This actually sounds pleasant,nice to listen to.
To say the least, I loved it. Absolutely. Great work!
One final note: the left hand occasionally plays a little too loud. At least that's what I think.

[LoreRD]

Thank you for taking the time to listen to it all the way!
During the "worn" part I tried doing staccato with different melodic lines for the separate hands. Guess it didn't turn out quite as well as I'd hoped
About the focus on the left hand: earlier I'd gotten comments that the left hand was too inactive. Getting a balance is tricky.