<original><pony> Rarity's REM

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<original><pony> Rarity's REM

Postby Scootalootacris » 11 Aug 2012 10:09

Hey guys! After a pretty long absence I'm back to making music; here's my newest song.

Went for something a little slower and more chill this time, late night driving music. All feedback welcome!

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Re: <original><pony> Rarity's REM

Postby Freewave » 11 Aug 2012 11:14

Well it's a bit repetitive but quite relaxing. Those wubs actually work ok in the track even if the glitched samples don't really work as well. My biggest recommendation is to look into adding some more layers, additional melodies, and some automation and effects would help as well. Not bad at all though and nice to have you back!
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Re: <original><pony> Rarity's REM

Postby Scootalootacris » 11 Aug 2012 11:50

Freewave wrote:Well it's a bit repetitive but quite relaxing. Those wubs actually work ok in the track even if the glitched samples don't really work as well. My biggest recommendation is to look into adding some more layers, additional melodies, and some automation and effects would help as well. Not bad at all though and nice to have you back!


I'd agree with all your points here, I definitely feel I need to improve on creating melodies. Thanks for listening and the feedback!
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