by tesselode » 07 Aug 2012 13:03
This song has some issues with its production. The kick drum is rather wimpy sounding at the beginning, and when the lower kick drum comes in, it sounds OK, but there's some rattle-y high frequencies that you might want to cut out. The bass seems like it's really loud, and you should probably have it duck out of the way of the kick so that it doesn't drown out the kick. Also, this song is kind of repetitive, although it does make good background music.
Good things: I like the harmonies you have going on. The overall feel of the song is actually quite cool. Just add some variety and mix it better and you'll have a winner.