<Pony><WIP><Electroswing><Original> Hydra Swing

[Doctor Science]

This is supposed to be a theme for the hydra in S1 E15. I'm about to leave on a week-long vacation, so I'm posting this pretty early in its writing, but I could really use some feedback, especially on how to make the drop (I think that's what it's called) better, as I'm pretty uncomfortable with anything that isn't straight up orchestral. Please tell me what you think so far and how I can make it better!
http://soundcloud.com/doctorscience/hydra-swing

[XXDarkShadow79XX]

Did you use FL's default drums?

[Freewave]

Yeah the drums seem very uninspired. it's also a little unlayered before the sample. Afterwards its quite a bit better. Is it a captivating listen, no... but it's certainly a good start even if it just needs more layers and detail added to it. Just aim a little higher and be a little more imaginative i would say .