<Pony><Original>Chaos Conundrum

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<Pony><Original>Chaos Conundrum

Postby QuietDuck » 01 Aug 2012 23:45

http://soundcloud.com/quietduck/quietduck-chaos-conundrum

Hi :D

I'm QuietDuck.

This is my second song!

And Thanks to pmo0908!

He drew this album cover for me!
(His deviantart page : http://pmo0908.deviantart.com/ )

Enjoy :D
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Re: <Pony><Original>Chaos Conundrum

Postby ph00tbag » 02 Aug 2012 09:53

It's not bad. I would say that the hats don't need to be panned so hard, but it's very good otherwise.
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Re: <Pony><Original>Chaos Conundrum

Postby XXDarkShadow79XX » 02 Aug 2012 19:00

ph00tbag wrote:It's not bad. I would say that the hats don't need to be panned so hard, but it's very good otherwise.


For a song like this, the hats should be INSANELY PANNED. RAAAGHHH. Seriously, that would be pretty cool, the hats alternating from left to right every time they hit.

(I assume you're taking suggestions/critiques)

Now then, it goes without saying that this song needs some variation. I didn't hear a single breakdown after that gnarly synth kicked in around 0:48. I really expected 1:24 from 1:50 to be some epic breakdown, but it wasn't there. And you know what would have been epic? If that breakdown existed, then the second drop afterwards could be half time. THAT would be insane.

Your song is brutal, your sound design is great, those vocals have some really cool effects on them, and your song is really just fantastic overall. It just needs some variation to spice it up and make the whole thing EPIC.
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Re: <Pony><Original>Chaos Conundrum

Postby QuietDuck » 02 Aug 2012 21:05

XXDarkShadow79XX wrote:
ph00tbag wrote:It's not bad. I would say that the hats don't need to be panned so hard, but it's very good otherwise.


For a song like this, the hats should be INSANELY PANNED. RAAAGHHH. Seriously, that would be pretty cool, the hats alternating from left to right every time they hit.

(I assume you're taking suggestions/critiques)

Now then, it goes without saying that this song needs some variation. I didn't hear a single breakdown after that gnarly synth kicked in around 0:48. I really expected 1:24 from 1:50 to be some epic breakdown, but it wasn't there. And you know what would have been epic? If that breakdown existed, then the second drop afterwards could be half time. THAT would be insane.

Your song is brutal, your sound design is great, those vocals have some really cool effects on them, and your song is really just fantastic overall. It just needs some variation to spice it up and make the whole thing EPIC.



Thanks! your advice is very helpful. :D
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