<pony?><original><dark psy>Sonic Rainboom - Unnatural

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<pony?><original><dark psy>Sonic Rainboom - Unnatural

Postby ph00tbag » 30 Jul 2012 09:57

Quite a departure from the more melodic stuff I've been doing lately. Heavily influenced by Strange Attractors by Freq.

Critique is, as always, welcome.

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Re: <pony?><original><dark psy>Sonic Rainboom - Unnatural

Postby Familiar Foreigner » 31 Jul 2012 04:03

Nice!
The start is a bit too slow, and I think you could've made the piece shorter - 8:37 might be pushing it. On the other hand, it definitely holds up all this time, so it's cool.

And Twi and Cadence syncs up perfectly with the beat. ;)
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Re: <pony?><original><dark psy>Sonic Rainboom - Unnatural

Postby konsolN » 31 Jul 2012 14:01

I thought the Intro is ok. The length... whatever you want, as said above it holds up all the time.

(Man I LOVE This Atmospheric Tracks >.<
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Re: <pony?><original><dark psy>Sonic Rainboom - Unnatural

Postby ph00tbag » 03 Aug 2012 17:07

Yeah, length is always a sticking point for a lot of my tunes. It's mostly preference, I've found. I like really long tracks, so I make long tracks. Thanks for the feedback, though. :)
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