<nonpony> <remix> DEMONDOTGIRLS.MOV (need opinions)

[TechnoMetalDude]

Is it really that bad?



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lqq0XSdvwCY

Ive been told it is, i have also been told to stop making music.

I have also been told to kill myself by the creator of the song.

[CaineTheDoomBringer]

Well, I'm no expert at electronic music, but I have to say, the song sounds really cluttered. Like, there's too much going on at one time. Either the arpeggios don't really fit, or they're too loud because they're overshadowing the rest of the song. The intro was a little out of tune, and I don't know what drum samples you used, but they could've been better. The drum patterns were okay, but it just sounded really bland to me because of the samples. In fact, the volume was really unbalanced throughout. Not that it was a bad song, it just needs some better mixing.

I've heard some of your other stuff. It's good, you should definitely not stop making music. But I think in the context of this song, you have a ways to go. Music is a learning process, and practice makes perfect. Don't let some douche on the internet convince you to stop making music. that's just silly.

[TechnoMetalDude]

Well thanks, i did make it in one day, i just was kinda excited and just really wanted to make something out of it.. I kinda just went through making it and listened to it once then exported. It is not the best, but it definitely isn't terrible.

[TechnoMetalDude]

Hey, is this better? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gdtEk7-QciA

[CaineTheDoomBringer]

Actually, yes. The volume on the tracks is a little more balanced out, and it sounds MUCH less cluttered. I don't know what they guy was going off about, I like the arpeggios, they were just a little loud in the original. Much better, if you ask me. ^^

[TechnoMetalDude]

Yeah, Thanks so much for the advice, yours is 13 times better than that guys "advice" And i agree that the samples are absolutely stock. Do you recommend any (free) sample packs or something of that nature.

[NewWorldMare]

There are a lot of good places you can go for drum samples. Searching online can turn up gems. This thread is a good place to start.

[TechnoMetalDude]

Oh thanks, that works..

[TechnoMetalDude]

Final version, Hopefully it is a lot better with the mixing http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lqq0XSdv ... e=youtu.be