by Aviators » 06 Jul 2012 19:56
I think it's very nice as it is! The drums are simple but very fitting for the mood of the song. Even the snare is nice! xD
A suggestion I have is to come up with a stronger beginning. The chippy sounds are nice, but they sound a bit odd at the beginning with nothing else. Maybe some sweeping pads would give you a nice chill intro. The vocals towards they end seem to get a bit drowned out as well, so you might wanna work on the mixing in general, especially towards the end. Great job though, I love it as it is! With a few improvements it could be mind-blowing.