Untitled Trance WIP

[MichaelA]

So I came up with this melody yesterday, and a lot of people seemed to like it. Tell me what you think!
http://soundcloud.com/michaelarellano/lunasanthemwip

EDIT: I decided to name it Luna's Anthem, because this song makes me think of Luna. I don't care what anyone says, I like the name

Also, updated the link, it now has A LOT more stuff added to it!

[NightColt]

I like it- the intro is kinda spooky, maybe kinda like daybreak - or sundown! It's like the sun has just passed under the horizon through a haze and the moon rises and starts flashing funky lights all over the place and everyone starts to dance. Like zombies. Maybe like Story of the Blanks, but with more party!

Or something. I dunno.

[MichaelA]

I like it- the intro is kinda spooky, maybe kinda like daybreak - or sundown! It's like the sun has just passed under the horizon through a haze and the moon rises and starts flashing funky lights all over the place and everyone starts to dance. Like zombies. Maybe like Story of the Blanks, but with more party!

Or something. I dunno.

Here, check the link again, I updated it with the most recent version.

[Icky]

ooooohhhh, I like it pickle, I like it a lot!

Some things you could do:
1. Pony vocals.
2. I know you probably were planning on this, but swap out those Nexus leads.
3. Make it more obvious its about Luna.

(btw my remix turned into EuroStyle (Dont know if thats a genre yet, but thats what Im calling it): http://www.mediafire.com/?j65u5ka4blk5csv )

[MichaelA]

ooooohhhh, I like it pickle, I like it a lot!

Some things you could do:
1. Pony vocals.
2. I know you probably were planning on this, but swap out those Nexus leads.
3. Make it more obvious its about Luna.

(btw my remix turned into EuroStyle (Dont know if thats a genre yet, but thats what Im calling it): http://www.mediafire.com/?j65u5ka4blk5csv )

I was thinking of this, however the only lines Luna says("I'm so sorry", "I missed you so much big sister") don't really work with the song.