<nonpony><original> As I Unwind

[CWeissRun]

http://soundcloud.com/cweissrun/as-i-unwind

A song I made for Mother's Day (my gift to mom, since I was broke and she likes me to make her music). After sitting on it for a while, I gave it another listen, and decided I'd finally post it somewhere.

Criticism completely welcome! Tear it apart! (Can already guess; it's short, poorly mastered, and manages to both jump around and be very repetitive. My opinion, may be right, may be wrong.)