<wip><remix><nonpony> CrushCrushCrush (KillerAmp Remix)

[KillerAmp]

This is the first thing ive actually done, currently its a WIP and its going to be in the dubstep genre, ive gotten up to the drop. which is where i stopped, and im really looking for some thoughts and ideas for improvement, which i can tell there's plenty of space for ;_;
Any advice/criticism would be great
soo yeah here it is
http://soundcloud.com/officialkilleramp/crushcrushcrush-remix-wip

[Edened]

The drums are too loud in the first part. I can barley hear the pads too.

Its sounding good so far though, keep it up!

[KillerAmp]

http://soundcloud.com/officialkilleramp/crushcrushcrush-remix-wip-2
Taken advice and changed some things, i think this ones better
EDIT: soundcloud's being stupid ;-;