<pony>8-Bar Verse over Love Is In Bloom (Extended Version)

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<pony>8-Bar Verse over Love Is In Bloom (Extended Version)

Postby MC_Flowny » 01 Jul 2012 20:37

Not exactly sure this is a remix. I simply took the extended version, and widened the gap about 4 bars so I could put a nice little 8-Bar verse in there.

Anyway, I love the song, and I felt that I could add my own sentiments! :D

Enjoy!



Lyrics:

From the beginning I could tell.
Our story together whatever way would end well.
And well, here we are on the verge of matrimony.
I'd be the groom and you would be my little pony.
Only in this case you would be my light.
You would be my life.
And in every sense of the word you would be my wife.
And it's right, when we first met.
You planted the seed.
And it's bloomed to a love that I NEED. Please.

~Rhyme Flow
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Re: <pony>8-Bar Verse over Love Is In Bloom (Extended Versio

Postby KillerAmp » 02 Jul 2012 20:54

the rap i like, if you want the sound to be fuller when you do it, i would say record it twice then sync them togather, also i would have normalized the volume so it fit perfectly in the song, but its a cool rap :D
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