by Triple_B » 01 Jul 2012 09:52
At first your snare sounds like someone whacking a shed with a piece of pipe or something; sounds off, then the rest of the track comes in and it sounds much better. Your kick needs more high end to punch through the mix better, after a bit it melds together with the bass. Both the kick and the snare could use compression. Whatever piano you used sounds very, very, very fake. Just saying. With the direction you went with the track it sounds fine, but for future reference, I'd find a new piano, (Nexus has great synth ones, there are some awesome Kontakt libraries for piano, and... that's really all that comes to mind immediately) Avi's vocals sound stellar, and your mix in general sounds fairly well-put together, as far as EQ goes, at least.
The piano continually throws me off though.
I do indeed like the bass, reminds me a bit of trance. Kinda.
A well put together track, I must say, not too shabby, but of course not perfect, (an artist's work never is, am I right?)
Overall; good job.
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