<Pony><Remix> In Wonder (Tremil Remix)

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<Pony><Remix> In Wonder (Tremil Remix)

Postby Tremil » 30 Jun 2012 21:01



My entry for Aviators remix contest. I decided to remix his track "In Wonder". I might try to make a second remix entry. So. What do you think?

Original by Aviators: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OSKrPdB2HsM
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Re: <Pony><Remix> In Wonder (Tremil Remix)

Postby Lopsided » 01 Jul 2012 07:46

To be brief, this was a really good song.

To be less brief, I really enjoyed this a remix, the harmonizing you did with the vocals was good and the track was well put together as far as my ametuer ears could tell.
I'm not going to comment on the drums because I really have no idea about that sort of thing but one thing i would like to say is that i felt the track improved from good to great when the piano line came in, but i guess that's what you were going for. All in all, I like it but I don't have the ears for any mixing problems or such that may exist :P
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Re: <Pony><Remix> In Wonder (Tremil Remix)

Postby Triple_B » 01 Jul 2012 09:52

At first your snare sounds like someone whacking a shed with a piece of pipe or something; sounds off, then the rest of the track comes in and it sounds much better. Your kick needs more high end to punch through the mix better, after a bit it melds together with the bass. Both the kick and the snare could use compression. Whatever piano you used sounds very, very, very fake. Just saying. With the direction you went with the track it sounds fine, but for future reference, I'd find a new piano, (Nexus has great synth ones, there are some awesome Kontakt libraries for piano, and... that's really all that comes to mind immediately) Avi's vocals sound stellar, and your mix in general sounds fairly well-put together, as far as EQ goes, at least.

The piano continually throws me off though.

I do indeed like the bass, reminds me a bit of trance. Kinda.

A well put together track, I must say, not too shabby, but of course not perfect, (an artist's work never is, am I right?)

Overall; good job.
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Re: <Pony><Remix> In Wonder (Tremil Remix)

Postby Tremil » 01 Jul 2012 16:04

Triple_B wrote:Whatever piano you used sounds very, very, very fake.


Yeah. I've been having to use FL Keys (which i know is awful) :oops: I've been trying to get Nexus but I can't find a good DL
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