<WIP><PONY><ORIGINAL>Fluttershy the Monster

[Ed Viper]

Okay, so this is my first complete draft of this song.

Looking for feedback, things I could change, things I should do differently, etc. etc.

Here ya go:

http://soundcloud.com/emperor-bermensch/fluttershy-the-monster-1st

[Kushy Kallous]

Sorry I don't really have much of anything constructive to say.

But I do really like this.

[Matthew N.]

Do something with the vocal clips. They just appear out of nowhere, and I am pretty sure they are in standard form; without any EQing and effects (*cough* reverb *cough*) - at least the two first ones. On another note, the whole WIP as it is right now seems to be based on the same bass line pattern. Change it around here and there.

[Ed Viper]

Alright, good feedback. As it is now, only a couple of the vocal samples are EQ'd so I'll continue working on that.

As for the bassline, I'll see what I can do to spruce it up a bit. It's not typical for UKstep to change basslines but there's always room for improvement, I suppose.

[Raddons]

I thought the variations on the bassline were real good. I really like the song and I can't seem to conjure up any real feedback besides the fact that I like it

[Matthew N.]

What I meant is that it runs as ********----____ all the time.

[Ed Viper]

What I meant is that it runs as ********----____ all the time.

Yeah pretty much. Like I said, it's pretty unusual for UKstep to change the bassline in a song, but I'll see what I can do.