<WIP><PONY><ORIGINAL> Dance of the Desert

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<WIP><PONY><ORIGINAL> Dance of the Desert

Postby Ed Viper » 30 Jun 2012 00:00

Yeah, this started as just a moombahton song that ended up with tons of zecora samples in it.

This is just a first draft, so although the song is more or less complete, I'd like some feedback and see if there's anything I should change or tweak. Also of note, this isn't completely mixed yet, I still need to do that.

http://soundcloud.com/emperor-bermensch/dance-of-the-desert-1st-draft

At any rate, I'm hoping to submit this to EQD once it's complete. Do you guys think it'd have any chance of getting accepted?
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Re: <WIP><PONY><ORIGINAL> Dance of the Desert

Postby KillerAmp » 30 Jun 2012 11:10

im really likeing the beat to it and the vocal sampleing is pretty cool, the only thing is its a little repetitive and some of the sampeling is being used a lot, i think you might have a change of it being accepted if you find a way to spice it up a little more!
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Re: <WIP><PONY><ORIGINAL> Dance of the Desert

Postby KillerAmp » 30 Jun 2012 11:10

im really likeing the beat to it and the vocal sampleing is pretty cool, the only thing is its a little repetitive and some of the sampeling is being used a lot, i think you might have a change of it being accepted if you find a way to spice it up a little more!
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Re: <WIP><PONY><ORIGINAL> Dance of the Desert

Postby Ed Viper » 30 Jun 2012 17:58

Alright, cool. Like I said above, this is just the 1st draft, so I still need to do a bit of tweaking here and there.

Thanks for the help!
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Re: <WIP><PONY><ORIGINAL> Dance of the Desert

Postby KillerAmp » 30 Jun 2012 22:44

yup its no problem! :D
sorry for the double post btw, my phone does weird things xD
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Re: <WIP><PONY><ORIGINAL> Dance of the Desert

Postby Ed Viper » 30 Jun 2012 23:43

I feel bad about having to make changes to this song tomorrow, but I think I'm gonna have to. My mind's not working with me tonight.
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Re: <WIP><PONY><ORIGINAL> Dance of the Desert

Postby Raddons » 01 Jul 2012 00:43

It has such an exotic feel to it. Man, I really like this one so far. I don't think the repetition is too bad at all. I quite like it. The melody is real interesting as well.
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Re: <WIP><PONY><ORIGINAL> Dance of the Desert

Postby Ed Viper » 01 Jul 2012 03:28

Cloud wrote:It has such an exotic feel to it. Man, I really like this one so far. I don't think the repetition is too bad at all. I quite like it. The melody is real interesting as well.


Whenever I make moombah, that's pretty much the feel I go for.

I was wondering about the repetition of vocal samples as I was making this, but there's so few Zecora samples out there T_T
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