<Non-pony> <Original> Anforium - Fare Ye Well

[Anforium]

Hi! I'm new to these forums, and just finished my song for the charity album and hoped to get some feedback on it!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5oKaxO4-TxA

Please give honest critisms on it. Thanks everypony!

[KillerAmp]

Honest Critism:
its got potential, i just think that the sounds are a little bit empty and i cant find a straight pulse, its got a cool sounding melody but as i said the sounds are a little simple, sounds like just sin saw and square waves, i would say add a little more personalization to the sounds, and to work at adding a little more to give it a fuller feeling