<NP><Remix><WiP> "Stardust Jazz" [JAZZ-HOUSE]

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<NP><Remix><WiP> "Stardust Jazz" [JAZZ-HOUSE]

Postby BassRabbit » 28 Jun 2012 13:39

I decided to remix one of the greatest songs to ever come out of a Sonic game.

This is a WiP, so please give me some critique so I can make it the best song it can be!

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Re: <NP><Remix><WiP> "Stardust Jazz" [JAZZ-HOUSE]

Postby NewWorldMare » 28 Jun 2012 17:58

I like this! It's really catchy, and I'm in love with the build into the sax melody. Just make sure it doesn't get repetitive if you extend it :3

Maybe bring the sax out a little more - it's fading into the background.

I would also suggest fiddling with the velocity of the keyboard to make it sound more natural. Especially when the notes come in quick succession, it sounds computer-generated.
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Re: <NP><Remix><WiP> "Stardust Jazz" [JAZZ-HOUSE]

Postby Raddons » 28 Jun 2012 18:02

I like it :D Sonic music has always been a big influence to my compositions. Yeah, I agree that the sax should come out a bit more :)
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