<Pony><WIP><Orchestral> Thy grace, Queen Chrysalis

[DasDeer]

http://soundcloud.com/dasdeer/thy-grace-queen-chrysalis-wip

Hi guys!
Could use some help from some of you more orchestral oriented fellows out there. While i have some experience with orchestral, i could still use some help.
NOTE: It's missing a intro and i haven't put in any effects yet; so have that in mind.

What i personally think is that i use too many instruments at one time; it gets muddy and sounds a bit "bleh".

Any feedback is appreciated!

[Dr_Dissonance]

I've always thought of ol' Chrysalis having a much more hostile/dissonant soundworld than this...=P

That being said, it was quite nice. I don't really have much to say about it. Maybe add woodwinds, as I hear none...or very few...

Good job!

[Solarsail]

It's near perfect.

It does sound muddy but I think that suits Chrysalis well.

The progression is a little repetitive after 1.30, you could add a melody there but take away at least one other instrument because there's a lot going on already.

[DasDeer]

Thanks alot for the feedback guys!
The reason i didn't give this a hostile sound, is because i wanted it to reflect a storyline, where Chrysalis won the battle over Canterlot. While she still is evil, she mostly spends her days inside the throne room; i wanted to give this song a feeling like you just walked inside.

I appreciate it guys; i'll have your feedback in mind when i finish this one.