<Non-pony><Original> Paine Fericita

[bread]

After a lot of Drum and Bass tracks I really felt like making some more house music. What I tried to go for in this track was a sortof chilled-out sound with an ever changing melody.

I hope you enjoy it and if you've got some feedback I'd be glad to hear it!

[S.A.S.Falcon]

I gotta say, I think you did good with the 'chill-out' style of this soundtrack. I like it
For a couple of suggestions, I would probably use something slightly softer for the non-bass rhythm, it would probably fit a little better with the flowing bass beat.
Also, the song seems to end a little abruptly, perhaps leave the high rhythm ending where it does, but keep the base rhythm going and maybe have it fade out.

That's all I can think of changing in this song. Good job with it

[bread]

I gotta say, I think you did good with the 'chill-out' style of this soundtrack. I like it
For a couple of suggestions, I would probably use something slightly softer for the non-bass rhythm, it would probably fit a little better with the flowing bass beat.
Also, the song seems to end a little abruptly, perhaps leave the high rhythm ending where it does, but keep the base rhythm going and maybe have it fade out.

That's all I can think of changing in this song. Good job with it

Thank you

When I was up in the 7+ min of the track I got the though, who is going to listen to this for this long? Maybe I should have thought fuck that and kept going to get a better ending than just trying to end it without it getting too long.

[S.A.S.Falcon]

Well, for the ending part, I think you would only really need to extend the base beat for about 10-15 seconds (maybe 4-8 bars), just to give a bit more winding-down for the song.

[bread]

Alright. I will keep that in mind for the future.

[KemicolKid97]

not about the song itself but how did you get the visualizer

[bread]

A friend made it. I think he did it in After Effects.