[Pony Original] The Night Falls Again (Electro...?)

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[Pony Original] The Night Falls Again (Electro...?)

Postby Symphon » 23 Jun 2012 09:21

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W3X6VVk2TiU
This is actually a few days old but it's probably one of my better tracks, so I was wondering what ya guys thought of it. I might stick with this type of style.
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Re: [Pony Original] The Night Falls Again (Electro...?)

Postby Sugarholik » 23 Jun 2012 11:20

The mixing is muddy, it needs more treble. Also the lead should stand out more. Next time compare your song to other songs from same genre when you're mixing. That helps alot. Otherwise the track has dark feeling and describes nicely what's it supposed to. Keep it up!
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Re: [Pony Original] The Night Falls Again (Electro...?)

Postby Symphon » 25 Jun 2012 10:39

Yeah, I'm still really workin' on mixing, easily my worst feature. Thank you for the feedback. ^^
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Re: [Pony Original] The Night Falls Again (Electro...?)

Postby Edened » 26 Jun 2012 17:00

The kick you used has too much bass and it kinda overwhelms the track. You should just need to EQ it. When you finish a track, try playing it on a bunch of different speakers and headphones. Gives you a better idea of what it sounds like.

Also, this:
MikeGallop wrote:The mixing is muddy, it needs more treble. Also the lead should stand out more.


I like the track though, just need some polishing. I like the artwork and visuals too, good job.
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Re: [Pony Original] The Night Falls Again (Electro...?)

Postby Symphon » 29 Jun 2012 12:49

I took your advice, and I think I fixed it. http://soundcloud.com/tunersymphon/the- ... n-mastered
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