<Pony> <Original> The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well

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<Pony> <Original> The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well

Postby Decmaster IX » 22 Jun 2012 16:13



Here's an original dubstep/drumstep track from none other than me! I'm quite proud of this one. Sorry that there are no vocal clips, it's just that the Mysterious Mare-Do-Well doesn't, well… speak.

I'd love some feedback on this. I'm always glad to learn new techniques.
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Re: <Pony> <Original> The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well

Postby soultensionbenjamin » 22 Jun 2012 16:15

the link is broken my friend.
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Re: <Pony> <Original> The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well

Postby Matthew N. » 22 Jun 2012 16:18

Someone really needs to make a huuuuuuuuuuuuuge announcement that you should NOT embed youtube links with data fter "&".
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Re: <Pony> <Original> The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well

Postby Decmaster IX » 22 Jun 2012 16:41

Sorry about that! I just saw the box with the play button and assumed it was all right. Everything's fixed now.
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Re: <Pony> <Original> The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well

Postby Matthew N. » 22 Jun 2012 16:46

Listening and writing this as it runs:

The initial bassy growl synth, in my opinion, could use some slight reverb. During the build-up, lower frequencies of kicks, subbass and that prev. mentioned synth overlap big time. Needs some serious EQing.

Other than that I liked it. Nice stereo spread on the synths.
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Re: <Pony> <Original> The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well

Postby ph00tbag » 22 Jun 2012 17:32

I feel like the first sub-bass shows up around 0:15 could maybe use some boosting, but that just might be my headphones.
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