<Original><Pony> Battle for Equestria v.1

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<Original><Pony> Battle for Equestria v.1

Postby MrCrackles » 16 Jun 2012 11:04

Sooooo, after a long time of lacking creativity I've finaly finished BfE. It's an orchestral electro thing with no classical build up or something. I just had a picture in my head and tried to create a song to it^^ .
It's the "just finished" version and I will probably do a few changes.
So pls give me some critics and some advices so it can become better.

http://soundcloud.com/mrcrackles/battle-for-equestria-v-1




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Re: <Original><Pony> Battle for Equestria v.1

Postby Nikki-Layne » 16 Jun 2012 14:40

This is pretty epic. Big ups, dude!
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Re: <Original><Pony> Battle for Equestria v.1

Postby senntenial » 16 Jun 2012 15:29

Kick seems a tad overbearing. And PLEASE use something other than the default fls samples.
Nice chord progressions. I like the resonances.
Actually very good. Just sort out that kick, and it'll be 20 times better. I'd pick a sample that is a tad more bassy, and then layer with a hat or something. Add a transient shaper or somethin'.
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