<Pony><Original> Ponies Are Great (feat. Andrew W.K sort of)

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<Pony><Original> Ponies Are Great (feat. Andrew W.K sort of)

Postby ThatRobChap » 16 Jun 2012 06:09

http://soundcloud.com/robskean/ponies-are-great-feat-andrew-w

Did this in about 3 hours, it's far from perfect but I felt it had to be done. :lol:
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Re: <Pony><Original> Ponies Are Great (feat. Andrew W.K sort

Postby LoreRD » 18 Jun 2012 05:33

Sounds really nice, but it feels like it goes on for just a little too long.
Other than that, great job! :D
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Re: <Pony><Original> Ponies Are Great (feat. Andrew W.K sort

Postby vladnuke » 18 Jun 2012 14:00

Needs to be harder. About 20% harder. And everything is off tone. And sporadic and nonsensical. And you made me think you were gonna go all hard with Andrew's exclamation there, but then you laxed up. Needs to be mixed better. Needs to flow better, structure/melody-wise. Needs to have better drum work, go find more drums (rip them from songs, obtain sample packs, that sort of thing) and play them over eachother to build new drums. The drums don't fit the wobble bass, the wobble bass is going everywhere but the right direction and when I saw your post, I ignored where my hands where, went to click it and spilled tea on my pants, and that kinda how I felt when I heard this song.

I liked the intro though, that flowed really well, and everything felt right there. Up to 1:00. I also liked both interludes, because it was a good rest from the off key wobble basses <-(most apparent at 2:00, I mean really).

But for something done in three hours, pretty good job. Making this better won't actually be as hard as I made it look.
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