<Pony> <Remix> Rainbow Factory Remix (Please Critique)

[A.I. Music]

This is actually the second time I've remixed this song; the first being months ago and very, very terrible. So here's my second attempt at it, and I would really, really appreciate critique from you guys. I could really use tips to learn from. Thank you.

-Alexander

http://youtu.be/rmLiL03XqLw
http://youtu.be/rmLiL03XqLw
http://youtu.be/rmLiL03XqLw

[Tremil]

Coming form just a guy who listens to music. It sounds like it has potential. but it has some clashing and parts that sound out of pitch with each other. Another thing i noticed is... there's no bass. Without any bass it sounds kind of dull or flat. Especially with the wubs and such. Its hard to get into it when there's nothing to back up all the action that's going on.

[A.I. Music]

On the clashing parts, I fail to see what you mean. Please explain so I can learn from it. And for the bass, there is sub bass in there. It's just that on my speakers it was somewhat amplified a tad much, so I reduced it's power, which I now see I should not have done. But thank you for your comment.

-Alexander