<Wip><Original>Cloudsdale Morning<Experimental Atmospheric>

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<Wip><Original>Cloudsdale Morning<Experimental Atmospheric>

Postby GhostXb » 26 May 2012 13:18

http://soundcloud.com/ghostxb/cloudsdale-morning

Started off experimenting with some sounds that I really liked. After adding the guitar, I realized the delay in the pads were out of sync, but rather then fix it, I thought I'd experiment and try to work the guitar in with some out of sync melodies. I pictured waking up in Cloudsdale and looking at a beautiful sunrise high above the clouds :D

Let me know what I can do to improve the track. If I think I can go somewhere with this, I might use it for the Faithful and Strong album.
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Re: <Wip><Original>Cloudsdale Morning<Experimental Atmospher

Postby Sense A » 26 May 2012 13:39

Nice track man, loved the atmosphere you created with all the different sounds, pads, and effects goin on! If I could say one thing though (and I'm not a champion when it comes to wording it right), the guitar melody thingy is nice sounding in the low notes, but when it goes to the higher notes it sounds a bit screechy, and for me detracts from the calm morning atmosphere of Cloudsdale, but hey, it's totally up to you man :D
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Re: <Wip><Original>Cloudsdale Morning<Experimental Atmospher

Postby GhostXb » 26 May 2012 14:03

Sense A wrote:Nice track man, loved the atmosphere you created with all the different sounds, pads, and effects goin on! If I could say one thing though (and I'm not a champion when it comes to wording it right), the guitar melody thingy is nice sounding in the low notes, but when it goes to the higher notes it sounds a bit screechy, and for me detracts from the calm morning atmosphere of Cloudsdale, but hey, it's totally up to you man :D


Yeah I agree, the guitar is a bit screechy, and I'm not quite sure what's causing it. I might redo it from scratch. Keep in mind I'm using Slayer 2, not the greatest vst but I do what I can with it.

I wish I had the money to go buy an actual guitar :oops:
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