<original><pony>A Cloudsdale Summer - I'm proud of this one

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<original><pony>A Cloudsdale Summer - I'm proud of this one

Postby spacebrony » 26 May 2012 13:08

I'm really happy with this one. There are a few things I might change, but as a whole I think it sounds really good.

http://soundcloud.com/spacebrony/spacebrony-a-cloudsdale-summer
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Re: <original><pony>A Cloudsdale Summer - I'm proud of this

Postby vladnuke » 27 May 2012 22:08

I love the overall instrumentation, very good flow. However, coming out of the second breakdown, I would change up the melody, otherwise, it starts sounding repetitive. On another note, drums could use more layering. This is really one of those tracks that screams for vocals, which is good.
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