<WIP><Non-Pony><Portal 2> Throwing Science at the Wall

[BinaryBludgeon]

This is my current (and best) WIP, dedicated to the songs of Portal 2. Right now, I only have the reconstructing science part down, and it needs critique. The whole song's transposed to D minor (As will every other song going into here), and it's going to culminate into a giant finale. I need all the critique I can get, as I want my first *real* project to be extremely big, and unforgettable, to me and the listener.

The song is here: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/11219554/Portal%202%20Rmx.mp3

So, I guess, let me know what you think of it

EDIT: I'm aware of the weird hit on the synth in the beginning. It's a problem with my DAW that I'll fix before I release it.

[BinaryBludgeon]

I may extend the reconstructing science bit a bit more...

[DannyMirage]

I like it
I think it could use some crunchier bass, but then again I'm a lunatic.
It definitely gives off that aperture science feel.
you better make this longer though.