<wip><pony><original>A Cloudsdale Summer (feedback'd be nice

[spacebrony]

I'm really liking how this is sounding (I'm an amateur, though).

I feel like the mixing is missing something, though. And I wanna rework the drum track...

And is it too long? Is not enough happening? I tried to make sure that something new was introduced at least every four bars, but I don't know if that's enough. I'm afraid it might lose it's interesting-ness. I don't know.

Anyway, here you go, I don't know what else to say except thanks for any feedback I might get:

http://soundcloud.com/spacebrony/spacebrony-a-cloudsdale-summer

[gnarbeard]

The drum track isn't bad, at least to start out. When it switches to the more "marching" style of beat it sounds like it's building up to something, but then it doesn't. I can't make out your kicks very well either (I'm not sure if that was the intention). I know extremely little about EQing, but I'm sure that's something you can mess around with.

I really like the melody. It's has a pleasant and airy feel.

I'm not really sure what to tell you to add. Changing up the drums might help give the song a more complete feel.

Overall, I like what you have so far and where it's going!