<Original><WiP> Silverstar

[Belgerum]

http://soundcloud.com/belgerum/silverstar-wip-1

A WiP that I'm making for "Lesser Knowns" that's currently in production here: http://mylittleremix.com/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=2845

For now, I want constructive criticism. not feedback. CRITICISM. I NEED TO BECOME MORE PERFECT.

[vladnuke]

The synths starting at 0:30 sound very flat. Acutally, if I had to sum up the track in one word, it would be flat. 1:44 sounds pretty jazzy, now add in more things to make it jazzy-er. So more background harmonics and fix up the synths. The track seems disjointed, work on transitions. The track seems too varied in volume, work on EQing. Get better samples in general, as the ones you have now sound kinda uninteresting and flavorless. This sounds like something out of a SNES game. I don't know if you were going for that.

TL;DR: The midi is fine, work on the synths, samples and EQ. And toss in a couple filters, the track feels cold.

[colortwelve]

The synths starting at 0:30 sound very flat. Acutally, if I had to sum up the track in one word, it would be flat. 1:44 sounds pretty jazzy, now add in more things to make it jazzy-er. So more background harmonics and fix up the synths. The track seems disjointed, work on transitions. The track seems too varied in volume, work on EQing. Get better samples in general, as the ones you have now sound kinda uninteresting and flavorless. This sounds like something out of a SNES game. I don't know if you were going for that.

TL;DR: The midi is fine, work on the synths, samples and EQ. And toss in a couple filters, the track feels cold.

All of these are now in my notes for when I get back to working on my remix of this song.

[Belgerum]

The synths starting at 0:30 sound very flat. Acutally, if I had to sum up the track in one word, it would be flat. 1:44 sounds pretty jazzy, now add in more things to make it jazzy-er. So more background harmonics and fix up the synths. The track seems disjointed, work on transitions. The track seems too varied in volume, work on EQing. Get better samples in general, as the ones you have now sound kinda uninteresting and flavorless. This sounds like something out of a SNES game. I don't know if you were going for that.

TL;DR: The midi is fine, work on the synths, samples and EQ. And toss in a couple filters, the track feels cold.

HOLY S***

Thank you, I'll get right on that!