[Poni][Remix] - Smile smile smile smile smile...

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[Poni][Remix] - Smile smile smile smile smile...

Postby Sugarholik » 21 May 2012 10:31

Late to the party :P

http://soundcloud.com/mikegallop/smile

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Re: [Poni][Remix] - Smile smile smile smile smile...

Postby Facade » 21 May 2012 14:05

OH MY THIS IS AWESOME
SO MUCH AWESOME
SO MUCH PONI
SOOOOOO AWESOME :D
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Re: [Poni][Remix] - Smile smile smile smile smile...

Postby Sgt-Whip (DJQ) » 21 May 2012 19:13

Very nice. The lyrics are a bit off center with the track (or at least sound that way to me), and at times feels a bit empty in spots. That might benefit a bit from a more prominent bass/subbass. Other than that, this track has great energy with those happy-go-lucky synths. Good job.

Especially like the smile smile smile section.
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Re: [Poni][Remix] - Smile smile smile smile smile...

Postby Sugarholik » 22 May 2012 02:51

Sgt-Whip (DJQ) wrote:The lyrics are a bit off center with the track (or at least sound that way to me)

Huh? they should be in the middle. I had a stereo delay on vocals with slightly different filtering on both channels, maybe it's that. If it is, then you have ears of a fox O_o

Sgt-Whip (DJQ) wrote:and at times feels a bit empty in spots. That might benefit a bit from a more prominent bass/subbass.


I'll keep that in mind.

Sgt-Whip (DJQ) wrote:Good job.

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Thanks! :D Makes me really happy to know that I'm doing somehing right. Thanks alot!
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Re: [Poni][Remix] - Smile smile smile smile smile...

Postby Facade » 22 May 2012 09:09

haha your welcome man i love your stuff keep up the good work
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Re: [Poni][Remix] - Smile smile smile smile smile...

Postby Freewave » 24 May 2012 11:59

This is awesome. Is this the first happy hardcore remix of this track? So glad you did this as this totally captures the theme of the original. Amazing job.

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Re: [Poni][Remix] - Smile smile smile smile smile...

Postby Sugarholik » 24 May 2012 12:24

DJ Pon-3 wrote:things

zomg! O_o
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Re: [Poni][Remix] - Smile smile smile smile smile...

Postby ph00tbag » 24 May 2012 12:36

This is intense. I feel like the kick is lacking in meat, though, especially for gabber.
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Re: [Poni][Remix] - Smile smile smile smile smile...

Postby Freewave » 24 May 2012 13:26

well maybe. gabber and 4/4 happy hardcore are different tho, could they be beefier? probably....
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Re: [Poni][Remix] - Smile smile smile smile smile...

Postby K3WRO » 25 May 2012 07:56

OMG I love this, Pretty Happy and Upbeat for gabber/hardstyle :D

But the sad part is, I probably have to remake my smile remix I'm working on, it's because it sucks compared to yours and the melody sounds too much alike (actually, same) :(

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Re: [Poni][Remix] - Smile smile smile smile smile...

Postby Freewave » 25 May 2012 08:50

thats the only problem with show remixes is that if someone does a particular genre first and well they've effectively iced it for anyone else trying anything similar. that and you can only hear the same song interpreted so many times.
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Re: [Poni][Remix] - Smile smile smile smile smile...

Postby Sugarholik » 25 May 2012 08:52

ph00tbag wrote:lacking in meat


DJ Pon-3 wrote:could they be beefier? probably....

Will try to get more steak for next one...

K3WRO wrote:OMG I love this, Pretty Happy and Upbeat for gabber/hardstyle :D

But the sad part is, I probably have to remake my smile remix I'm working on, it's because it sucks compared to yours and the melody sounds too much alike (actually, same) :(

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Thanks!
Again hardstyle, gabber and happy hardcore are totally different things. :) But you did the same melody? Really? :O
Do it anyway! There can never be too much smiles! ;)
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