<Original> <Nonpony> <Dubstep> Exponential Breakthrough

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<Original> <Nonpony> <Dubstep> Exponential Breakthrough

Postby Undefined Variable » 20 May 2012 23:09

After about a month of being serious about producing, I've finally made something that doesn't suck. Constructive criticism would be awesome!
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Re: <Original> <Nonpony> <Dubstep> Exponential Breakthrough

Postby Ed Viper » 20 May 2012 23:18

Undefined Variable wrote:After about a month of being serious about producing, I've finally made something that doesn't suck. Constructive criticism would be awesome!
http://soundcloud.com/undefinedvariable/undefined-variable-exponential


Pretty good, only your melodies are a bit odd :S Not really sure what I can say that would be constructive criticism there. Brush up a bit on music theory maybe (It's always a good thing to do, anyways).

Also, I liked your drum pattern, but try to vary it up a little bit here and there throughout the song. It gets a little boring to hear the same drums after a while.

Other than that, not a bad track! Props, dude.
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Re: <Original> <Nonpony> <Dubstep> Exponential Breakthrough

Postby Undefined Variable » 20 May 2012 23:21

EmpUbermensch wrote:
Undefined Variable wrote:After about a month of being serious about producing, I've finally made something that doesn't suck. Constructive criticism would be awesome!
http://soundcloud.com/undefinedvariable/undefined-variable-exponential


Pretty good, only your melodies are a bit odd :S Not really sure what I can say that would be constructive criticism there. Brush up a bit on music theory maybe (It's always a good thing to do, anyways).

Also, I liked your drum pattern, but try to vary it up a little bit here and there throughout the song. It gets a little boring to hear the same drums after a while.

Other than that, not a bad track! Props, dude.

Thanks man. I got lazy with the drums after spending so much time coming up with a good bassline sound, lol. I've been meaning to study music theory, just haven't gotten around to it yet.
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Re: <Original> <Nonpony> <Dubstep> Exponential Breakthrough

Postby Ed Viper » 20 May 2012 23:42

Undefined Variable wrote:Thanks man. I got lazy with the drums after spending so much time coming up with a good bassline sound, lol. I've been meaning to study music theory, just haven't gotten around to it yet.


Haha, no problem. I've gotten by alright and all I really know is keys and intervals XD and of course, musical notation, which is really the backbone of music theory.
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