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<Pony><Original><Orchestral>Changeling's essence

Postby CommandSpry » 20 May 2012 16:55

Hey guys, this is my new track, a.k.a orhcestral as done by an electronic idiot.

I honestly have no idea how to do orchestral, I have 0 music theory knowledge, I don't know what a dissodance or a cadence is, I don't even know what key that's in! xD

But I'd apprechiate you telling me if you enjoyed it or not.

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Re: <Pony><Original><Orchestral>Changeling's essence

Postby Arvianth » 21 May 2012 07:33

CommandSpry wrote:I have 0 music theory knowledge, I don't know what a dissodance or a cadence is, I don't even know what key that's in! xD

This may help fixing it http://www.musictheory.net/lessons

About the song - I liked it, but wish it had a bit more realistic samples x)if my noob opinion counts xD
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Re: <Pony><Original><Orchestral>Changeling's essence

Postby Dr_Dissonance » 21 May 2012 08:44

CommandSpry wrote:dissodance


That's a dance in honour of me...DO IT!!!
Dissonance on the other hand is the greatest thing ever...that's all you need to know...

Moving on to the piece. Pretty good! Main thoughts are as such:

Opening strings sounded a bit dry, use more or better reverb!
All I hear is Strings and Percussion...where's the Brass and Woodwinds? They would certainly enhance this immensely. No wait, I think I just heard woodwinds...or is that a synth? I cannot tell...
Drumline is nice, but doesn't really do much. Shake it up a bit!
Change key more! Changing key increases tension or creates relaxation. If you want to really get people, go to a dominant key, that'll send some shivers down spines!

That's all I can think of for now, sounding real good, considering you said you don't know much theory.
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Re: <Pony><Original><Orchestral>Changeling's essence

Postby CommandSpry » 21 May 2012 11:09

Dr_Dissonance wrote:
CommandSpry wrote:dissodance


That's a dance in honour of me...DO IT!!!
Dissonance on the other hand is the greatest thing ever...that's all you need to know...

Moving on to the piece. Pretty good! Main thoughts are as such:

Opening strings sounded a bit dry, use more or better reverb!
All I hear is Strings and Percussion...where's the Brass and Woodwinds? They would certainly enhance this immensely. No wait, I think I just heard woodwinds...or is that a synth? I cannot tell...
Drumline is nice, but doesn't really do much. Shake it up a bit!
Change key more! Changing key increases tension or creates relaxation. If you want to really get people, go to a dominant key, that'll send some shivers down spines!

That's all I can think of for now, sounding real good, considering you said you don't know much theory.


Thanks (:

Well, I'll look into dissodance just for you, although it will probably be like reading Hebrew to me xD

That instrument is weird, it's supposed to be an erhu, but the VST is free and a demo so I just had a little bit of fun with it. Erhu is a chinese stringed instrument, you know, that one that makes you cry errytiem.

Like I said, I don't even know what key that is xD You could just as well tell me to invent a cure for stupidity, I have no idea how to do any of it.

Thanks for the drumline, because I just loaded about 10 instances of drums, cymbals, snares and sh!t, I dunno anvils, chimes, bells, crashes, timpans, and started just adding them one by one xD

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That's how that looks

(Fegelein is a badass instrument)

I kinda gave up on srs music and I'm doing whatever I kinda feel like at the time, but maybe sometime I'll look into that site and see about some actual music theory.

Cheers ^^
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