Sounding really good! The opening reminded me of Age of Empires...I think it was the sound of a busy village...
Anyway, things to improve on:
1) The speedy drumming at that section at 3.10 onwards sounds obviously synthesized, maybe take a look at that!
2) African drum patterns rarely play an unsyncopated beat, so syncopate it more!
And I just read that you probably won't be coming back to it...

Oh well, still, a very fun piece to listen to!
TubeyouYou are the hero My Little Remix deserves, not the one it needs.
So we’ll hunt you. Because you can take it. Because you’re not our hero.
You’re a silent guardian of music, a watchful protector of songs.
A doctor of dissonance.
-Phillypu